屈伸副会长对《中国外交》（2010）有关译法的个人看法
关于《中国外交》（2010）（英文版）有关译法的个人看法
张建敏主任：
新年好！
衷心感谢贵室以您为领头羊的杰出的英文翻译团队为中国文化走出去做出的巨大贡献！请接受我作为一个普通外事工作者的崇高致意。
我是一个英语爱好者，自1982年读大学英语专业以来一直坚持每天早上晨读30分钟，对中国政治、法律、外交中译英特别是口译情有独钟。
我一直自费购买贵室翻译的《中国外交》（英）。2014年通过逐页阅读《中国外交》（2010）（英文版），现提出书中有些译法的个人看法，供您指正。（注：前面括号里的英文为我的个人看法，后面括号里面为书中页码）
1、 It welcomed the willingness of the United States for fully
engage ( engaging) in the meeting between the six nations and
Iran,……( p31)
2、 Zhou Yongkang, Member of the Political Bureau Standing
Committee of the CPC Central Committee and Secretary of the
Political and Legislative ( Legal )Affairs Committee of the CPC
Central Committee,……(p44)
3、 Russian President Medvdev ( Medvedev)…….( p63)
4、 Guided by this principle, the Chinese government properly
handled Taiwan’s participation in the 62nd session of
WHA( WHO) as an observer……(p83)
5、 Premier Wen Pointed ( pointed) out that China attached
importance to its relations……(p137)
6. Jiang Yikang, member of the CPC Central Committee and
Secretary of CPC Shandong ( miss out “Provincial” )
Committee……( p140 )
7、Vice Chairman of CPPCC Guangxi Provincial( Zhuang
Autonomous Regional ) Committee……
Vice Mayor of Tianjin (miss out “Municipality” )
Vice Mayor of Chongqing (miss out “Municipality” )
Chairman of Xiamen (miss out “Municipal” ) People’s Association
for Friendship with Foreign Countries
and member of the Guangdong provincial party committee
( Standing Committee of CPC Guangdong Provincial
Committee ) …… Lin Xiong…… ( p143)
8、 general Ge Zhenfeng, Deputy Chief of the General Staff of
the People’s Liberation Army, visited Jordan at(as) the head of a
military delegation.(p193)
9、 Chinese enterprises in Luxemburg ( Luxembourg ) extended
their activities……( p207 )
10、 In November, Wang Zhizhen, CPPCC Vice Chairperson
( Chairwoman )……(p263)
11、 Zhou Yongkang, member of the Standing Committee
( missout “Political Bureau”) of the CPC Central Committee and
Secretary of the Political and Legislative ( Legal )Affairs
Committee of the CPC Central Committee,……( p264 )
12、 Wang Zhizhen, CPPCC Vice Chairperson ( Chairwoman )
……( p268 )
13、 Zhou Yongkang, member of the Standing Committee of the
Political Bureau and Secretary of the Political and Legislative
( Legal )Affairs Committee of the CPC Central Committee of the
CPC Central Committee paid an official goodwill visit to Sudan.
(the second “of the CPC Central Committee” should be crossed
out),……( p278 )
14、 Director of the Councillors ( Councilors), Counselors Office
of the State Council Chen Jinyu…… ( p281 )
15、 In the wake of the July 5 incident in the Xinjiang city of
Urumqi( Urumqi of Xinjiang )……( p285 )
16、the Foreign Affairs Office of Guangxi Provincial ( Zhuang
Autonomous Regional People’s ) Government……( p348 )
17、Vice Chairman ( Director or Minister ) Zhu Shanzhong of
China National Tourism Administration ( p357 )
18、 Guo Yanyan, member of the leading Party group ( Leading
Party Members Group or Party Leadership Group)……( p358 )
19、The Chinese government attaches great importance to its own
capacity building for counter ( countering) nuclear terrorism……
(p 417 )
20、Let my ( me ) give you some examples to better illustrate this
point. ( p 547 )
21、Remarks by H. E. Dai Bingguo，State Councilor State
Councilor (the second “State Councilor” should be crossed
out )……( p 584 )
22、101 R. O. Korea Xi’an Shanxi ( Shaanxi ), Gansu, Ningxia
13 June 2006 ( p 632 )
23、127 Thailand Xi’an Shanxi ( Shaanxi ), Gansu, Ningxia
1 July 2005 ( p 634 )
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2015年1月14日